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 Munchlax and Phanpy Chapter 1 The Duel

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Hawker

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PostSubject: Munchlax and Phanpy Chapter 1 The Duel   Munchlax and Phanpy Chapter 1 The Duel I_icon_minitimeSun Feb 21, 2010 9:49 am

Munchlax and Phanpy
Chapter 1: The Duel

Munchlax and Phanpy sat there in the giant tree. Phanpy decided to take a walk around his new home.

Phanpy: Oh what a wonderful place and a wonderful day!

Arthor: Hey! What a wonderful time today!

Phanpy: ..........

Arthor left.

Phanpy: That was so weird.....

Phanpy kept walking around when suddenley she spotted a Munchlax.

Munchlax: Munchlax! Munchlax Munch!

Phanpy: Phanpy Phan!

Munchlax: Munch munch Munchlax.

Phanpy: Ok so can we please talk in English so the readers know what the hell we are saying?

Munchlax: Fine.

Phanpy: I`m new to this place.

Munchlax: ME TOO!

Suddenley Munchlax started moving towards Phanpy.

Phanpy: Uh what are you doing.

Munchlax took a bite outta Phanpys trunk.Phanpy flew into the air in pain while screaming.

Phanpy: Phanpy! PHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANPY.

Phanpy landed back on the tree with a thump

Phanpy: What was that for?

Munchlax: Lol

Phanpy: I`m gonna make you pay! Take this!

Phanpy rolled up into a ball and starting rolling towards Munchlax at full speed and knocked him into the air. Munchlax Body Slam`d Phanpy and farted on him.

Phanpy: EWW!

Phanpy slapped Munchlax in the face with his trunk. Munchlax`s hand glowed. He slapped Phanpy in the face hard twice in a row. Phanpy charged up another Rollout but Munchlax snuck behind her and used Hyper Beam. Phanpy was blasted far away and she screamed while flying through the air just like before.

Phanpy: Phanpy! PHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANPY!!!!!!!!!

Phanpy lied there on the ground in major pain. Then she was spotted by a Turtwig.

Turtwig: Uh whats the matter?

Phanpy: In pain...... Call 911......

Turtwig yelled out.

Turtwig: 911!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 911!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WE NEED 911!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Phanpy: No call them with a phone you idiote.

Turtwig: I don`t have a phone.

Phanpy: ........

Turtwig: Want this Super Potion? I stole it from some human named Brock.

Phanpy: Theiving isn`t right.

Turtwig: Yea but humans are evil though. They catch you and force you to battle Pokemon. Whats even worse is they attack us with Lvl 100 EV trained Pokemon.

Phanpy: Not all of em.

Turtwig: Anyways do you still want the Super Potion?

Phanpy: Yes please.

Phanpy took the Super Potion.

Phanpy: Thanks so much.

Turtwig: Your welcome.

Phanpy took off to battle Munchlax. She went back to the tree and met up with him.

Phanpy: This time I`m not gonna lose!

Munchlax: Oh yeah?

Phanpy used Rollout again surprisingly doing a lot of damage to Munchlax.

Munclax: OW!!!!!!!!!

Phanpy: Hurt huh?

Munchlax: Uh.... no?

Phanpy Tackled Munchlax making him fall over. Munchlax got back up and banged Phanpy with his skull.

Phanpy: I`m not done yet.

Munchlax: You suck.

Phanpy: NO U

Munchlax tried to Skull Bash Phanpy again but she dodged with Quick Attack and smashed into him knokcing him off the tree. Munchlax cried out while falling.

Munchlax: Muuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuunchlax!

Munchlax slammed to the ground. He farted so hard it made him fly back up onto the tree. He aimed a Hyper Beam at Phanpy who dodged with Quick Attack again. Phanpy used Take Down knocking Munchlax off the tree once again. This time Munchlax was defeated.

Phanpy: FINALLY!

Phanpy went into here house in the tree and rested.

Phanpy: Goodbye everyone!

Chapter End.........
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PostSubject: Re: Munchlax and Phanpy Chapter 1 The Duel   Munchlax and Phanpy Chapter 1 The Duel I_icon_minitimeSun Feb 21, 2010 11:09 am

awesomeness. it would be awesome if you posted more chapters.

just a suggestion, when the characters talk, you might want to use ""
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PostSubject: Re: Munchlax and Phanpy Chapter 1 The Duel   Munchlax and Phanpy Chapter 1 The Duel I_icon_minitimeSun Feb 21, 2010 7:35 pm

lol this ish a funny story thing
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PostSubject: Re: Munchlax and Phanpy Chapter 1 The Duel   Munchlax and Phanpy Chapter 1 The Duel I_icon_minitimeSun Feb 21, 2010 8:20 pm

yup. i hope he posts more soon
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