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PostSubject: my story Chapter 2   Tue Mar 09, 2010 6:48 pm

fine here is chapter two


At the end of January, The widow had a set of twins. She named them Jesse (boy) and Jane (girl of corse). With the widow so tired and Mat so sick Sophia found a job as a cook's assistant. Sophia brought the twins with her so her mother didnt have so much to deal with.

The first few days at her job was easy. All sophia did was take out trash, wash dishes, And learn to cook better. On her fith day working About 50 travlers Cam to the resturaunt. Because of this, Sophia had to wash dishes five times faster than normal and had to tak the trash out 10 times. Usually after work Sophia was paid 20 dollars because of how well she worked Sophia was paid 100 dollars cash and 20 dollars in tips!!!! After she was paid, Sophia ran to the alley her family lived in and said to her mother, " Mummy! Mummy guess what? My boss, Mr. Cruchette gave me 100 dollars and i got 20 dollars in tips!" Sophia shivered in the cold January wind.

"Well thats great!" the widow rejoiced, "pleas go straight down to the market and buy some new blankets so we can keep warm."

The next day Sophia was paid 50 dollars for doing extra work. She left the restraunt without noticing the snow on the trees and on the ground. She ran home without a word. When she got home she looked at her brother and shreiked a small shiek. Matthew was sicker than ever.
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PostSubject: Re: my story Chapter 2   Tue Mar 09, 2010 6:50 pm

Awesomeness!! 1000000000/10 ^^
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PostSubject: Re: my story Chapter 2   Tue Mar 09, 2010 6:53 pm

10/10 I like it
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PostSubject: Re: my story Chapter 2   Tue Mar 09, 2010 6:54 pm

awesomeness!!! 9/10

please continue =P
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PostSubject: Re: my story Chapter 2   Tue Mar 09, 2010 6:59 pm

omg bro i told u im not going to continue
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PostSubject: Re: my story Chapter 2   Tue Mar 09, 2010 7:10 pm

????why????
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PostSubject: Re: my story Chapter 2   Tue Mar 09, 2010 7:12 pm

lol i havet=nt finished chapter 3 yet
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PostSubject: Re: my story Chapter 2   Tue Mar 09, 2010 7:13 pm

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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PostSubject: Re: my story Chapter 2   Tue Mar 09, 2010 7:15 pm

yeah
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PostSubject: Re: my story Chapter 2   Sat Mar 13, 2010 8:47 pm

Nice work, Aurora. ^^ 10/10
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PostSubject: Re: my story Chapter 2   Sat Mar 13, 2010 8:55 pm

There is a lot of spelling errors, but of well ^^
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