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PostSubject: Bakugan: Invasion on Earth   Wed Mar 17, 2010 9:59 pm

An alarm is sounding. People outside of the room are yelling to try to get Vampyre out of bed. it is a Saturday morning in Piro Town.
“Ugh. Morning already?” Vampyre said as he was getting out of bed. “What’s with all the yelling already? Can’t a kid get some rest?!”
“Get down here Vampyre. Novus is waiting on you! He found something you might need to know about!!!” Yelled Vampyre’s mother while she was cooking breakfast.
Vampyre gets out of bed, gets dressed, then heads down stairs to see what all the yelling is about. Vampyre then trips down the stair and falls the rest of the way down like a ball rolling down a hill then lands face first on the hard wood floor.
“See what happens when a kid can’t get some sleep!” said Vampyre when he got up off the floor.
“Come eat breakfast then after that, Novus needs to have a talk with you” said Vampyre’s mother while placing Vampyre’s plate of scrambled eggs and bacon.


About ten minutes later, After Vampyre and Novus finish eating breakfast, they go up to Vampyre’s room to talk.

“What did you need to talk with me about?” Vampyre said as he got a Dr. Pepper out of his mini refrigerator.
“There have been reports on the web about Bakugan Disappearing!” Novus yelled as he got the website up on his laptop.
“I thought all Bakugan went back to Vestroia after Drago defeated…” A mysterious but familiar voice was heard at that moment. The whole room started shining really bright. The next thing Vampyre and Novus know, There were two marble-like figure flying right in from of them.
“Long time no see Vampyre” Tears came to Vampyre’s eyes.
“is that really you Lumigrowl? Vampyre said as he walked towards the flying blue sphere.
“ Yes, ‘tis me. There’s been trouble in Vestroia since you last left. A strange person by the name of Rize has been using his new found Doom Card to trap Bakugan in the Doom Dimension!!!” Lumigrowl yelled. “Rize has come to Earth now and we fear you two might be in trouble”. Novus then starts walking towards Lumigrowl.
“Did my partner happen to come with you?” Novus asked.
“Yes he did. In fact, Atmos is on your shoulder waiting for you to notice him” Lumigrowl laughed. Novus starts dancing around, happy to see Atmos. Both Lumigrowl and Vampyre agreed to limit him on soda so he won’t be so hyper during future visits.
“We better start looking for Rize before it’s too late” said Vampyre.

To Be Continued
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PostSubject: Re: Bakugan: Invasion on Earth   Thu Mar 18, 2010 9:31 pm

awesome so far cant wait till someone battles
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PostSubject: Re: Bakugan: Invasion on Earth   Fri Mar 19, 2010 12:33 am

lol. Its been so long since when i first created this... I changed the names and did alot of editing...


check this out:

old name :: new name
pikapal :: Vampyre
Novus Wayvern :: Novus
Rise :: Rize

minor changes but kinda good... and, Novus Wyvern here happens to be ice drakus and rise is ProYGO
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PostSubject: Re: Bakugan: Invasion on Earth   Fri Mar 19, 2010 7:20 pm

Hmmm yea good changes
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PostSubject: Re: Bakugan: Invasion on Earth   Fri Mar 19, 2010 8:23 pm

Yeah, and nice Bakugan fic, Feather. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Bakugan: Invasion on Earth   Fri Mar 19, 2010 8:46 pm

awesome story.
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PostSubject: Re: Bakugan: Invasion on Earth   Sat Mar 20, 2010 1:03 am

Here's the link to the original... I took the ending out because im gonna make that into part 2

http://baku4.forums-free.com/the-pyrus-generation-1-t6.html
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PostSubject: Re: Bakugan: Invasion on Earth   Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:09 pm

The ending was nice but it was a little short. But I still liked it.
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PostSubject: Re: Bakugan: Invasion on Earth   Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:57 pm

yeah, its going into the next one when i get time to make it
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PostSubject: Re: Bakugan: Invasion on Earth   Sat Mar 20, 2010 7:05 pm

ok
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PostSubject: Re: Bakugan: Invasion on Earth   Sat Mar 20, 2010 11:03 pm

He left me out of it. Sad
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PostSubject: Re: Bakugan: Invasion on Earth   Sat Mar 20, 2010 11:57 pm

i dont think you even joined that forum

edit: nvm, yes you did
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PostSubject: Re: Bakugan: Invasion on Earth   Sun Mar 21, 2010 12:15 pm

Lol, I was Starky.
Waaahhhh He forgot me!
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PostSubject: Re: Bakugan: Invasion on Earth   Sun Mar 21, 2010 12:34 pm

actually, you were gohydranoid101 at the time... your in part 3 i believe... or maybe it was part 2 =|
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