after the Tournament duel ep1 part 2/2

(in this some cards are not real )

"ill got first" pika said
"ok"jesse said
"i draw and summon stardust xioalong and play double summon i summon majestic dragon then another double summon i summon stardust awakener (atk1100 lv2 now if i discard my horus black flame lv6 from my hand my awakener i can special summon stardust dragon and tune my stardust with majestic and xiaolong to syhcro summon majestic star dragon the i play majestic attack now i play majestic atack i can tribute my dragon and his attack is dealt to you then i can special summon a stardust dragon i set a card and i end my turn" pika said
"alright i drtaw and play rainbow gate so now i can send all my crystals to the graveyard and summon rainbow dragon then i play crystal spirit a can summon back as many as crystals as i can on to the field so i summon 4 and the rainbows effect lets me sacfice them and he get 1000 for eack so now he has 8000 attack stardust"jesse said
"i play attack damage we both take bouble the attack of one monster i chose and i chose rainbow dragon"pika said
"so we both lose"jesse said
*they both lose and get knocked out
*a person appears and takes pika and jesse*
"pika and jesse!!"duelist says

to be continued

Nicccceeeee....

i know its pretty good

Pretty good.
I should probably make a part 3 for mine.

wow... kinda short... needs to be longer now next time =/

yeah i didnt know it was this short or i woulda made more but i didnt want to let to much detail out

I think you should probably use better grammar.
It looks better with better grammar.

i posted part1 ep2

I know.

im about to post part 2

they;re all awesome.

and as i said, too short