HomeNeo PortalGalleryFAQSearchMemberlistUsergroupsWatch Yu-Gi-Oh! 5DsRegisterLog in

Share | 
 

 after the Tournament duel ep1 part 2/2

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
AuthorMessage
duelistwinner



Posts : 534
Join date : 2010-02-01
Location : Not at Eternal Duel

PostSubject: after the Tournament duel ep1 part 2/2   Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:47 pm

(in this some cards are not real )

"ill got first" pika said
"ok"jesse said
"i draw and summon stardust xioalong and play double summon i summon majestic dragon then another double summon i summon stardust awakener (atk1100 lv2 now if i discard my horus black flame lv6 from my hand my awakener i can special summon stardust dragon and tune my stardust with majestic and xiaolong to syhcro summon majestic star dragon the i play majestic attack now i play majestic atack i can tribute my dragon and his attack is dealt to you then i can special summon a stardust dragon i set a card and i end my turn" pika said
"alright i drtaw and play rainbow gate so now i can send all my crystals to the graveyard and summon rainbow dragon then i play crystal spirit a can summon back as many as crystals as i can on to the field so i summon 4 and the rainbows effect lets me sacfice them and he get 1000 for eack so now he has 8000 attack stardust"jesse said
"i play attack damage we both take bouble the attack of one monster i chose and i chose rainbow dragon"pika said
"so we both lose"jesse said
*they both lose and get knocked out
*a person appears and takes pika and jesse*
"pika and jesse!!"duelist says

to be continued


Last edited by duelistwinner on Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:45 pm; edited 1 time in total
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Jesse Anderson
Administrator
Administrator
avatar

Posts : 1251
Join date : 2010-02-01
Age : 19
Location : The Planet of Blackwings

PostSubject: Re: after the Tournament duel ep1 part 2/2   Mon Feb 22, 2010 9:03 pm

Nicccceeeee....
Back to top Go down
View user profile
duelistwinner



Posts : 534
Join date : 2010-02-01
Location : Not at Eternal Duel

PostSubject: Re: after the Tournament duel ep1 part 2/2   Mon Feb 22, 2010 9:04 pm

i know its pretty good
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Jesse Anderson
Administrator
Administrator
avatar

Posts : 1251
Join date : 2010-02-01
Age : 19
Location : The Planet of Blackwings

PostSubject: Re: after the Tournament duel ep1 part 2/2   Mon Feb 22, 2010 9:07 pm

Pretty good.
I should probably make a part 3 for mine.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Vampyre
Administrator
Administrator
avatar

Posts : 2170
Join date : 2009-12-29
Age : 21
Location : Harper, KS

PostSubject: Re: after the Tournament duel ep1 part 2/2   Mon Feb 22, 2010 11:18 pm

wow... kinda short... needs to be longer now next time =/
Back to top Go down
View user profile
duelistwinner



Posts : 534
Join date : 2010-02-01
Location : Not at Eternal Duel

PostSubject: Re: after the Tournament duel ep1 part 2/2   Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:26 pm

yeah i didnt know it was this short or i woulda made more but i didnt want to let to much detail out
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Jesse Anderson
Administrator
Administrator
avatar

Posts : 1251
Join date : 2010-02-01
Age : 19
Location : The Planet of Blackwings

PostSubject: Re: after the Tournament duel ep1 part 2/2   Tue Feb 23, 2010 7:51 pm

I think you should probably use better grammar.
It looks better with better grammar.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
duelistwinner



Posts : 534
Join date : 2010-02-01
Location : Not at Eternal Duel

PostSubject: Re: after the Tournament duel ep1 part 2/2   Tue Feb 23, 2010 7:53 pm

i posted part1 ep2
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Jesse Anderson
Administrator
Administrator
avatar

Posts : 1251
Join date : 2010-02-01
Age : 19
Location : The Planet of Blackwings

PostSubject: Re: after the Tournament duel ep1 part 2/2   Tue Feb 23, 2010 7:53 pm

I know.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
duelistwinner



Posts : 534
Join date : 2010-02-01
Location : Not at Eternal Duel

PostSubject: Re: after the Tournament duel ep1 part 2/2   Tue Feb 23, 2010 8:11 pm

im about to post part 2
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Vampyre
Administrator
Administrator
avatar

Posts : 2170
Join date : 2009-12-29
Age : 21
Location : Harper, KS

PostSubject: Re: after the Tournament duel ep1 part 2/2   Sun Mar 07, 2010 11:45 pm

they;re all awesome.

and as i said, too short
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: after the Tournament duel ep1 part 2/2   

Back to top Go down
 
after the Tournament duel ep1 part 2/2
View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» Yugioh Championship Series - Duel Academy
» Duel Terminal Part 2 RP
» Duel Academy Regionals - Swiss Tournament, March 2012
» [TCG] Generation Duel Tournament
» The Special Tournament

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
 :: General :: Fan Area :: Fan-Fiction Stories-
Jump to:  
Free forum | © phpBB | Free forum support | Contact | Report an abuse | Free forum